Thursday, 16 March 2017


In writing I have been learning to:
  • use all basic punctuation independently
  • attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses)

I have been especially focussing on using parentheses and commas. I have highlighted these in green where I have used them as well as other punctuation that I changed because it was used incorrectly. Here is a piece of my writing that shows this.

Integrity is being honest and fair. A leader who has shown integrity is Nelson Mandela
Because when he became president he changed the law to make it fair for everyone. Integrity is important in my leadership role because peer mediators need to be fair at solving problems. I will be demonstrating this by being fair on duty.

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